I just ran a hundred miles to see you here,
excited as a child until I saw you,
face first in the electric water
All sides and angles have collided for me
and against you
Did I truly ever expect an angel with bright red chains to take the time to speak to me?
When she could look, face first into the next dimension over,
the other side of the water surface?
Her whole face is consumed by it.
What would she ever have of me?
excited as a child until I saw you,
face first in the electric water
All sides and angles have collided for me
and against you
Did I truly ever expect an angel with bright red chains to take the time to speak to me?
When she could look, face first into the next dimension over,
the other side of the water surface?
Her whole face is consumed by it.
What would she ever have of me?
I really love this "face first in the next dimension over" phenomenal work!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :3. That was my favorite part. I adore little strokes of genius---makes me very happy with myself.
DeleteCleverly imaginative; well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you :3
Deleteinteresting. got me thinking about things. darn you
ReplyDeleteHa! You're welcome! That is truly one of the best reasons I write after all.
DeleteThought provoking write.....great for the prompt!! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you :))
Deleteaww I'm so excited! thank you, everyone!
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